Friday, April 16, 2010

Two Carnival Haikus and One Summer Haiku

burnt sugar breezes
bring relief to coaster fans
waiting in long line

humid August air
putrefying  dippin' dots
on dinosaur tar

summer polka dots
cool and stylish this year
calamine lotion

3 comments:

  1. Great sensory poem! You've done a wonderful job of describing several distinct smells using very few words.

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  2. I love your haikus! they're great!

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  3. Oh nice. I can smell the candy and feel the heat. Glad of that calamine lotion.

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