Great sensory poem! You've done a wonderful job of describing several distinct smells using very few words.
I love your haikus! they're great!
Oh nice. I can smell the candy and feel the heat. Glad of that calamine lotion.
Great sensory poem! You've done a wonderful job of describing several distinct smells using very few words.
ReplyDeleteI love your haikus! they're great!
ReplyDeleteOh nice. I can smell the candy and feel the heat. Glad of that calamine lotion.
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